Is this iambic pentameter?
Friday, September 25th, 2009I want to be with the birds, flying in the sky
No other animal, is quite as slow as me
Green leaves and acorns are all that I see
I saw a butterfly today; I wish I could be him
But surely such vanity, must be a sin
Will I someday be like him too?
I can only pray that such things are true
So I build my cocoon, and anticipate my fate
Now the only thing left to do is wait
After what seems like a lifetime I finally break free
But as I look down, I do not believe this is me!
I have colorful wings and I am graceful in flight
I feel like I could soar higher than a kite
No longer am I forced to only crawling on the ground
Now I can explore this beautiful world around
This is the most happy that I have ever been
Now I feel like my life can finally begin
I wish I could go to the heavens way up high
And personally thank God for my ability to fly
By: Care









